Thursday, June 12, 2014

****REVIEW* Breaking Shaun by E.M. Abel

Some men fall in love and hand their balls over to the first woman who keeps them interested—but not me. Surfing and my freedom are the only two things I’ve ever needed. Meaningless one-night stands are fun, but the drama and jealousy that follows them aren’t worth it. 
Until I met Natalie, I never realized there were women who thought like me. She enjoys sex with no strings, and with a body like that, there isn’t a man around who doesn’t want a piece of her—including me. 
But our friends and relatives all run in the same circles. And we all know friendship and sex leave a mess. Hearts always end up broken. 
I know it. 
But I still want her. 

Sometimes, the things we want don’t always come easily. Every choice, every action has consequences that can change you. 
They can change everything. 
And no matter how fiercely guarded, even the strongest hearts can break.

**WARNING** Not recommended for younger readers due to sexual content, language and recreational use of marijuana.
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 “Is this what you wanted?” he whispered as he took my wrists in one hand and the other came down to cup my breast.

            I swallowed as moisture gathered in my mouth and my brain scrambled for a response. It was just so difficult to think with Shaun’s hard body pressing against mine in the middle of his apartment building where anyone could see us.

            His gaze finally broke from mine and moved down to my lips as he glided his thumb across my hard nipple. I could smell the soap on him, feel his wet, warm skin pressed against me. My eyes fluttered closed and I pressed my head against the wall as the lust took over.

            Shaun moved his hips forward making me very aware of his arousal before lowering his head and slowly dragging his tongue across my bottom lip. I was panting now and my entire body was tingling. I don’t know how he’d done it but Shaun had completely turned the tables on me. I’d come over to assert myself and show him the side of me he hadn’t seen, yet here I was getting pressed against a wall and turning into putty in his hands. 



Excerpt #2:

“Come with me.” She said as she turned around and went back downstairs.

I followed her into the laundry room where she opened the dryer and took her stuff out. I was too busy staring at her bare ass to realize what she was about to make me do.

“I want you to put this on.” She said, her little black bikini dangling from her fingertips.

I started shaking my head.

“Oh, hell no.”

Natalie’s face got serious and she put her hand on her hip.

“A bet’s a bet. Don’t be a pussy.”

My eyebrows shot up and I gave her a challenging look.

“You better remember this shit later. Those words will come back to haunt you, trust me.”

She smiled as I snatched the scraps of fabric from her hand and tried to figure out how they went. When I got the bottom straight I held it up between us.

“My dick is gonna hang out of this shit.” I said as I moved it in front of my crotch.

Natalie was laughing now and I smiled when I saw how red her face was getting.

“You better hurry up before the pizza gets here.”

I groaned and pushed my board shorts down around my ankles. Natalie kept laughing as she watched me try to get my big feet into the foot holes and pull the bikini bottoms up. They were fucking tiny, my junk was hanging out everywhere.

“Here, let me help you.” She said as she came closer and put her hand on my dick.

“That…is not going to help.”

“Ssshh” she hushed me as she tried tucking my dick into the fabric but her touch was only making it worse.

I could feel myself getting hard.

               “Okay fine!” she said, giving up.   

“Just put the top on. But when the delivery guy gets here I want you to keep a straight face the entire time and ask him if he thinks this color looks good on you.”

Natalie was laughing again before she even finished her sentence. She seemed so young as she covered her mouth like what we were doing was so bad. It was cute to see her having so much fun. I also loved watching her move around in that short dress. Her nipples were hard and her tits were bouncing around a lot.

Baseball. Baseball. Baseball.

               I put my board shorts back on and Natalie helped me tie her bikini top over my chest. It looked so stupid but I made it work. Natalie had fun playing with my hair and swooping it to the side over my forehead. I looked like a manly version of Justin Bieber. It was ridiculous. 


 This  book was absolutely hot!! It was full of character. The personalities, so real, like people that you connect with.

Natalie not your typical girl who sleeps around for pleasure. Natalie feels that by using men to sleep with and dispose of them when she wants she avoid a connection that could prevent her from being hurt! She comes from a broken family a father who left when the mom gave birth a mother who was absent part of her life leaving her to fend for herself and her sister. After a bad experience at a party  leaves her to become the  distant  and guarded girl.

 She decides to move in with her cousin the only other person who knows and understands what she has been through. He introduces her to his  friends, that's where she sees him again the guy that has been in controlling her mind ever since he approaches her at the Gallery. After left her hot and bothered and she turned him down. Only to run into him here in Virginia at a bakery. And then again at Nick's best friend's house she begins to realize their really is no escaping him.
   Shaun the hot player sleeps around without a care in the world. Not ready to settle down but loves to hook up without any strings attached. He has a previous arrangement with a friend where they randomly hook up with commitment or promises of more and with the freedom of sleeping with anyone else they desire. That is until he realizes his arrangement has feelings for him so he calls it off. Plus he has another girl that he can't keep his eyes off or mind. Natalie ever since he met she left an impression on him that he just can't seem to shake off and he wants her bad.
 So how much more perfect can it be when he runs into her again at his sister Asia's BBQ. He approaches her again and once again she rejects him. Shaun always gets what he wants and he wants her.  When they finally both give in and begin hooking up. Their hook turns into much more. Feelings begin to develop between them. Until something in Shaun past comes to bite him in the ass. He has a huge decision to make an he may loose Natalie in the process.
I love this story absofucken loved it. It is hot and steamy. Characters are  funny and the banter between them hilarious! The story and how it develops is amazing. Specially the twist to what the end turned out to be. I never read a story that was different in the end. I truly loved Breaking Shaun!






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About E.M. Abel


My husband is awesome and also a Chief in the US Navy. This means crazy schedules, uncertainty and lots of nights spent alone writing on my computer. 

I have two amazing kids who always know how to make me laugh. 

I've been passionate about writing since I wrote my first poem in the 3rd grade and I've been using it as a means to express myself since. 

I think because I hold my emotions so close and fear being vulnerable I use different forms of self expression- writing, drawing, painting, photography, tattoos- to show the world who I am.

The one rule I use everyday is the Golden Rule--"Treat others the way you'd like to be treated." I believe karma is very real and sometimes she can be a bitch if you make her that way. 

I love acting crazy, I love to laugh, I love making people laugh, I love the ocean, I love dancing like no one is watching, I love good music, I love good books... oh man I should probably stop there. I love a lot of stuff. 

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